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divide changes and history #40

Open mcr opened 1 year ago

mcr commented 1 year ago
> 13) Section 5: I am wondering if it would make sense to divide Section
> 5 into 2 subsections:  One providing background (circa lines 370 to at
> least 403, or possibly as far as 427 or so), another summarizing the
> actual updates that were made?  This would seem both clearer and
> cleaner than what it is now.

> 14) Line 384: Do you have a reference for the consortia?

It was https://openconnectivity.org/developer/specifications/fairhair/ I'm not sure I want to link to it in a reference, but we could do that.