line 3: fixed capitalization
line 10: corrected capitalization
line 40: changed passive to active voice
24 and 44: edited section title
27: put URL inside ...
47: "Firstly" is not a word
40 and 47-52: when writing about system actions, use present tense instead of future tense.
line 3: fixed capitalization line 10: corrected capitalization line 40: changed passive to active voice 24 and 44: edited section title 27: put URL inside
...47: "Firstly" is not a word 40 and 47-52: when writing about system actions, use present tense instead of future tense.