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JCPNEXT4-84: Weird "Member contributing the Spec Lead" #78

Closed apastsya closed 7 years ago

apastsya commented 9 years ago

Jira issue originally created by user brunos:

In section 3.3.2, line 564 it says:

"If the Member contributing the Spec Lead withdraws from the JCP"

Although probably correct, this is a weird usage of "contributing", that conflicts with the general view of contributions in the document. Maybe we could change this to make easier to read?

apastsya commented 9 years ago

Comment created by pcurran:

See my last comment

apastsya commented 9 years ago

Comment created by brunos:

It is much better, but I find this phrase very hard to parse... I checked with a couple of other people, and it seems to be confusing...

Today it is:

"If the Member whose representative is the Spec Lead withdraws from the JCP before the JSR is ap- proved the PMO shall request the preliminary Expert Group to choose a replacement."

Suggestions for improvement:

Just suggestions...

apastsya commented 9 years ago

Comment created by pcurran:

OK: I changed to "If the Member who holds the Spec Lead position withdraws from the JCP..." in version 10 (not yet circulated, but will publish soon).

apastsya commented 9 years ago

Comment created by heathervc:

verified as fixed. close.

apastsya commented 9 years ago

Issue was closed with resolution "Fixed"