Overall comments:
1) You should be more consistent with referring to the original benchmark and your new one. You bounce between verification study and benchmark and previous benchmark.
2) You should pick a tense for referring to your study, I changed what i could to past tense.
3) I think you might have overused "note".
Overall comments: 1) You should be more consistent with referring to the original benchmark and your new one. You bounce between verification study and benchmark and previous benchmark. 2) You should pick a tense for referring to your study, I changed what i could to past tense. 3) I think you might have overused "note".
Attachment with some comments: 2018-bae-benchmark-gwenedits.pdf