Open halcyon-gh opened 4 years ago
Here are my remarks after reviewing up to and including the frigates.
I would suggest that Léopold I be ‘Leopold I’ for consistency with other Victorian era royals for whom you mainly use the Dutch names.
I would have suggested ‘Léopold Ier’ if you want to be using the French name (it should really be ‘Léopold Ier’ but we can’t do that with Windows-1252), taking motivation from this modern day example: French, Dutch.
However I cannot find any consistency in the matter and the Belgian navy refers to the ship in various ways in Frencha, b, including ‘Léopold I’, ‘Léopold Ier” or ‘Léopold 1’. I’m also seeing the same trend for the 1855 ship, including in your source. This is really pissing me off and giving me a headache.
(plus a couple other female royals)
I could not figure out some of the namesakes, can you walk me through them?
All of the rest (also I missed a couple cruiser names the first time around):
The cruiser names have a slight anomaly: Ambiorix appears before Jan Breydel, unlike every other occurrence where it appears at the end of the Jan Breydel to Jacob van Artevelde sequence. Obviously this makes no actual difference, but a consistent order makes it easier to tell at a glance how the names were put together and to locate copy/paste errors when reviewing. Definitively not a big deal.
What did inspire the Latin names? Putting a twist on the unmodded Belgique?
The names taken from rivers are also mixed French & Dutch. Here I don’t mind as much when it comes to consistency as I do for royal family names. If (and I do mean if) you want consistent names, I can help.
(Fun fact: commerce raider Ville de Fontaine-l'Évêque gets it right.)
👍 The commerce raiders use the nice looking apostrophe (’ U+2019 RIGHT SINGLE QUOTATION MARK, which despite the formal name is the recommended apostrophe), in the Ville d’ pattern. However the boring straight apostrophe (' U+0027 APOSTROPHE) is also used in a couple other palces. I would suggest consistently using the one apostrophe for all (and why not pick the right looking one for the job).
A tricky one to get right:
Since the ‘Ville de…’ pattern is French, I would suggest using all French names if you stick to it. I used this very handy modern-day reference for cross-reference purposes.
I don’t know Dutch well enough to suggest an alternative pattern, if you want to keep Dutch city names. Stad Amsterdam looks like one, from the neighbours to the North.
I did not review the ship classes, e.g. seeing what historical or historically-inspired names fit what Victoria 2 category. I liked a lot of it though! All in all I’m not super confident when it comes to my knowledge of warships during the period. If you still feel like the PR does need more eyeballs and ask me, I can look into it.
Out of the lot there is one thing that stands out to me: are Aster through Primula all taken from the modern-day minehunters? (That’s what your source lists.) If so, why did you use them for clipper & steam transports?
Thanks for the extensive feedback @moretrim, much appreciated. I will update the patch request and address your remarks when I have some time again in the coming weeks.
In general I've applied most of the suggestions provided by @moretrim. The Latin province names which were taken from the original name list, but now removed. The modern minesweeper names were originally included to fill out the transports name list to ~30 names, but are now replaced by expanding the list of precious stones which are more in line with actually used names. The women's names for dreadnoughts also include the names of 6 (great-)grandmothers of Leopold I.
Leopold/Léopold I/II 1/2: Yeah, this can give a headache. Reading a bit further makes me believe the first ship was simply "Léopold", and "Léopold II" was the second ship named Léopold, not named after king Léopold the second. The later ship "Léopold II" on the other hand probably was named for him. Because the names are used for cruisers, which are available only later in the game, it makes sense to me to use "Léopold I" to refer to the first king during the reign of the second. In short, I think I will keep the names "Léopold I" and "Léopold II".
Regarding matching names to ship classes: Belgium never had a significant navy before WW2, so I've interpreted the historical ship classes in the most positive light. Therefore "Louise-Marie" and "Duc de Brabant" end up as frigates even though they only had about half the amount of cannons of a typical frigate. Other sailing ships were included in the list of clipper transports, and ocean liners (paquebots) were included as steam transports. The later fishery protection ship "Ville d'Anvers" becomes a commerce raider, and the "Argus", "Minerva", and "Hirondelle" river patrol boats become monitors. Lastly, the post WW1 torpedo boats "Westdiep" and "Wielingen" become cruisers.
:+1: Top notch stuff, all well-organised. Can you check these two items:
Based on historical names found on http://www.marinebelge.be and extended with fictional names in the same vein.