Closed imasaru closed 5 years ago
@artemanufrij @ryonakano Let's try this again!
I tried to fix all of the grammar-related issues that I could find. I hope this helps! I also explained my corrections in line comments.
@artemanufrij Forgive me, I should have commented on the corrections in the green lines instead of the red. I'm not removing lines wholesale, sorry.
@imasaru thank you for your support!
@artemanufrij @ryonakano Let's try this again!
I tried to fix all of the grammar-related issues that I could find. I hope this helps! I also explained my corrections in line comments.