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(WIP!) Project Guide for ASAM OpenX standards
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Content feedback: "who" for persons #118

Closed Marius-ASAM closed 2 years ago

Marius-ASAM commented 2 years ago

Prerequisites

This is in regards to:

Subject

Persons are to be referred to with "who"

Section

Proposal Phase Details / Enrollment Process (just one of many occurences in the whole document!)

Description

The text reads "...named inviduals that will ..."

Suggestion

When referring to persons, use "who" instead of "that". The correct text should read "...named individuals who will...". Review the entire document for this common mistake.

URL https://asam-ev.github.io/asam-project-guide/asamprojectguide/latest/getting-involved/proposal/phase_details.html
Page Proposal Phase Details
Module getting-involved
philipwindecker commented 2 years ago

Fixed in https://github.com/asam-ev/asam-project-guide-content/commit/6573abf1b301efa68b8b190b706267f83871b142