OF Issue # 1 - Grammar Fixes for release

As seen on https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZHNdfRsSK2ECqFUmUdziHTkRFmpzhFhn/view

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First line should be "entirety" instead of "entirely"
"referred as" should be "referred to as"
"an universal" should be "a universal"
"on the Worldbook series" should be "in the Worldbook series"
"set outs" should be "sets out"
"control one character" should be "controls one character" Page 3:
"Final Fantasy have" should be "Final Fantasy has" Page 6:
Here and in some other places you write "self-explanatory" which I think is unecessary.
"if this imply risk of life" should be "if this implies ..."
"Nemesis" sometimes is referred to as singular, sometimes as plural

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"and don't need to be" should be "and doesn't need to be"
"as the player wish" should be "as the player wishes"
"Handle Animal" sounds weird as a skill name, D&D calls this "Animal Handling" Page 10:
typo: "player have more can express..." Page 11:
"For a character succeed..." should be "For a character to succeed..."
"the GM establishes as 30 the difficulty" should be "the GM establishes 30 as the difficulty" Page 12:
"achieves a significant goal or according to the story", I think the "or" shouldn't be here?
the image could be slightly larger
“Don Tonberry hate smoke!” should be "...hates..." Page 13:
try to make the last line of the "cheat death" paragraph fit into the first column if possible
"One point expenditure avoid" should be "avoids" Page 14:
"one character acts the same phase", should be "acts in the same ..."
"at any desired order" should be "in any desired order"
"A action" should be "An action" Page 15:
"recover HP or MP" should be "recovers ..." Page 16:
Put point "3." entirely into the second column
"to speed it" should be "to speed it up" Page 17/18:
either I am blind or the blue text is more dense (i.e. less line spacing) than the brown one
"This represent" should be "This represents"
"Skills works as" should be "Skills work as"
"can increase or decrease by 1 the confirmation roll’s value.", here "by 1" should be at the end of the sentence Page 19:
the bangaa image is a bit small in comparison to others
"a terrible vision" should just be "terrible vision" Page 20:
"his bestial blood" should be "your bestial blood"? Page 21:
"You’re very attached to that ideals", should be "... your ideals"
"has long rabbit ears" should be "have..."
"tips of the future", I think "hints of the future" would sound better here

atmafox / FFRPG4e

OF Issue # 1 - Grammar Fixes for release #268