zackbradys
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1 year ago Bullet Point 2: N/A
- "You don't need to set an admin username or password. It is set for you and is the "bootstrap" username and password (admin and Pa22word).
Bullet Point 3: Pending
- Will update instructions to make it more clear on which app and chart version in the App Catalog to use for LH and NV.
Bullet Point 4: Pending
- Will update the instructions to be more clear. Also will make sure any screenshots with credentials are blurred out.
Bullet Points 6/7: Pending
- Will update my sections to have the instructions. (Already knew this was an issue).
Reviewer Comments on several steps. Being more explicit in the instructions regarding these items may be helpful or (irrelevant):
Section: Workshop Environment: "some information missing about the required tools that I’m most like have to install using “Environment Setup script”? Refers to review question “Does the workshop include steps to set up prerequisites on customer laptops etc?“, which is set to “not applicable”, but I think it is and should be added to the docs"
Section: Exploring the cluster: "Isn’t here a step missing? ... after login with the bootstrap password, doesn’t the user need so set a admin password before confirming the ToC and Server URL?"
Section: Rancher Applications: "wouldn’t it be better to let the attendee navigate to cluster-tools to install the rancher apps, especially neuvector? Because there is still the old partner listing without SSO Integration into Rancher, I assume you want that people use the version which is integrated with rancher?"
Section Creating rke2 cluster: "not explained where the access key comes from which has to be used in step 3, I can guess i’m supposed to navigate to cloud formation based on the screenshot in step 4 - btw, maybe blur out credentials in screenshots next time, even if they environment was deleted."
Section: Conclusion: "cleanup step for the RKE2 cluster which was deployed by rancher is missing."
All Sections: "...steps are too high level"
All Sections: "... suggest to add a few words next to the screenshots. That’s actually also from an accessibility important, right now a lot of pages only contain screenshots, if someone uses a screenreader for example, they would not be able to attend to the workshop. Same for alternative texts on images"