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Chapter 1, incomplete sentence #11

Open jmg999 opened 4 years ago

jmg999 commented 4 years ago

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Chapter 1 - The Cloud, Section - Summary, page - 9 The second-to-last sentence in the Summary section is, "An even more "virtualized" kind of virtualization is serverless computing, where customers are aware their code and the network events that trigger it."

This sentence doesn't make sense. It seems that it's either missing words, or the thought is incomplete. I thought that it was possible that the word "of" had inadvertently been left out of this sentence between the words "aware" and "their." However, even if this was the case, this sentence, and the definition it's providing for serverless computing, would not match w/ the definition provided in the first chapter for serverless computing. On page six, the book states, "The serverless model...makes it possible to design code that reacts to external events." This would seem to be the opposite of a customer being aware of their code and the network events triggering it.

dbclinton commented 4 years ago

Wow. I have no idea how that one slipped by everyone. I think a better version would be:

where customers provide their code and define the network events that trigger it.

Thanks! I'll make sure this one gets fixed.

dbclinton commented 2 years ago

Here's how the whole sentence should look: An even more "virtualized" kind of virtualization is serverless computing, where customers provide their code and define the network events that trigger it.