balanced / www.balancedpayments.com

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Use a more active voice on push to card page #211

Closed KimlingLam closed 10 years ago

KimlingLam commented 10 years ago

Current copy: Let’s push money to debit cards. Send money to your customers without collecting bank account information.

Change to: Issue payouts to debit cards. Send money to your customers using only their debit card numbers and without requiring bank account or routing numbers.


Current copy: After receiving overwhelming support for this feature on our CrowdtiltOpen campaign, we are excited to begin development. Backers who contributed to the campaign will receive priority beta access. If you are interested in this feature, please submit your email to request an invite.

Change to: We're launching in private beta after receiving overwhelming support for this feature on our CrowdtiltOpen Campaign. Backers who contributed over $1,000 to the campaign will receive priority beta access. If you are interested in this feature, please submit your email to request an invite.


Current copy: Pay anyone easily Your sellers no longer need to hunt for their checkbooks or bank account information. You can now push money directly to their bank account using just their U.S. debit card.

Change to: Pay anyone easily You can now push money directly to customer bank accounts using their U.S. debit card; no need to collect their bank account information.


Current copy: Put sellers at ease Providing sensitive bank account information on a website can be an issue for sellers. Push to card is the perfect alternative as a convenient and readily accessible payout option.

Change to: Put sellers at ease Pushing money to debit cards is a fast and convenient way to pay sellers who may be concerned with providing sensitive bank account information on a website.


Current copy: Validate in real time Forget about delayed payouts due to incorrect bank account and routing numbers. Debit card information is validated in real time, ensuring timely delivery of money.

Change to: Validate in real time Real time debit card validation ensures timely delivery of funds. Forget about delayed payouts due to incorrect bank account and routing numbers.

matin commented 10 years ago

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