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baldurbjarnason / this-is-not-a-book

An old-fashioned hypertext about writing
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last of the first pass edits #15

Closed astearns closed 9 years ago

astearns commented 9 years ago

Not sure what to do with "too my expectations"

baldurbjarnason commented 9 years ago

Not sure what to do with "too my expectations"

Huh? Actually, neither do I. Have no idea what I meant with that when I wrote it. I'm changing it to:

Did it play with my expectations in an interesting way?

Which makes a lot more sense.