Summary

[bengalspice]

Code

• Try to follow SQL Style Guide #1
• I liked that you customized the visualization of the bar graphs by using red and yellow.
• Be careful of adding too many lines of code or variables that aren't absolutely necessary. #5, #7 , #9

Slides

• It would have been nice if you had used a background other than white. This causes the slides to be really harsh on the eyes, especially since you generated your pie chart and bar graphs in red and yellow which are really bright.
• I liked how you broke out the information and made each slide focused on one aspect of the analysis. This is evident in the slide on the conditions of each group in the test and the three separate Chi-Sq tests.
• Awesome job dedicating one slide to each bar graph! Many people don't bother to do this. It makes looking at the graphs so much easier.
• Recommendation: just repeat what the B group condition was in case anyone reading through the slides forgets by the end which condition worked best.
• Don't be afraid to include the information from participant interviews!

Overall, Great Job! I loved how thorough your slide deck is. All the information is there. I only recommend that you now work on the visual aspects to make your slides more appealing for presentation. This is really great work!

[bamayoen]

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it!