I'm gonna seem so annoying here, and this is a really small unessential issue, but maybe fix up the grammar a bit to make it seem a bit more modern and clean, for example, maybe add a bit more commas and fullstops. I can change this really quickly too if you want.
I'm gonna seem so annoying here, and this is a really small unessential issue, but maybe fix up the grammar a bit to make it seem a bit more modern and clean, for example, maybe add a bit more commas and fullstops. I can change this really quickly too if you want.