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I think the biggest thing I learned, and something I will take with me for future digital media composing, is that I should let the platform or tool I’m using play a role in guiding how a project gets executed. When experiencing a new platform at the start of the semester, I found myself getting frustrated by how I couldn’t make it do the thing I had envisioned in my mind so perfectly. I was coming from a background primarily of pencil and paper artwork. I wasn’t limited by computer code forcing layering to work in a certain way before and found this to be a cumbersome method of creation at first. I also went from one tool that could do it all, to having to watch hours of LinkedIn Learning to find one small tool in a haystack of other tools to solve each problem. Eventually though, I stopped seeing it as limiting when you pointed out to the class that these constraints afford us things that a sketchbook, for example, might not. By the visual rhetoric project, I started to view the assets not as puppets, but as actors in my project. The way they aligned gave me new ideas that completely changed my initial sketches. For example, looking at my original concept and early commits for my visual rhetoric project, I had initially planned to have the text erase the body icons, to represent the erasure that results from designing for. It soon became apparent that I could not create a solid enough background with the icons to make the erasing text legible, given that the contrast between my non-icon background and the text was problematically low at the time. I noticed, though, that the text aligned with the heads and revised the concept to make letters “erase” the heads in a more subtle, but more readable version of my initial idea. Constraints became guides, arrows toward a final project I could never imagine at the beginning. I learned it was far more advantageous to dance with, rather than forcibly execute, an idea.
I feel like I was most successful with my visual rhetoric project. I learned a lot about accessibility for the project as I went, which meant I was constantly updating the color palette, increasing the negative space, and adjusting the background pattern so the font could avoid being condensed. The slogan itself changed a few times between the start and finish. I relied heavily on feedback from those around me to see if changes made things more or less understandable (like when I removed the not-equal sign from my message). The commits show changes, such as a cane effect I was trying out, that never made it to the final project. I think with that project I was able to establish real clarity of message through effective visual hierarchy (for example, the color/size change of the “Design with” text). On the flip side, I felt the most challenged during the website unit. The word “fix” is featured in 6 of the 30 commits I made for the website building portion of this repository, to give an idea of the battle that occurred with bugs. A lot of my commits also have comments with questions about why a certain h2 is displaying the way it is, followed by a “fixed _” commit that involved a minor tweak to the CSS or a further div wrapping in the HTML. Particularly when it came to the stretch goal of trying to implement animation (I wanted to have a typewriter effect for the website’s subtitle), I really struggled with getting JavaScript to work. I had never actually used that language before, so it was difficult for me to piece together the syntax enough to understand where in my HTML it needed to go. However, I worked around that barrier by finding a way to add a similar animation effect with CSS, which I had become more familiar with toward the end of the project. Overall, especially thinking about the process of coming up with and creating the unit consolidation project in a short period of time, my strengths are in the brainstorming phase, creating flexible iterations to pace myself from the minimum deliverable to stretch goals, as well as creating pieces with clear visual hierarchy. I think I came away from this course improved in my ability to rapidly learn a new platform interface via experimentation (the soundscape project especially challenged me with that), as well as stronger coding skills (in the website unit) to add to what I’ve been learning about Python in another class. With coding specifically, tricks like wrapping divs in CSS borders temporarily to test scope, similar to the idea of adding extra print statements in Python to seek out hidden bugs, have proved to help slow my thinking enough to catch what mistakes I’m glazing over.
I think I was surprised by the sound unit and how relevant it was to the rest of the class. I initially saw it as kind of separate, since the other two projects were so visually based. Admittedly, I was kind of dreading it and was just wanting to get through it so I could get my hands on Photoshop. However, not only did I end up really having fun with finding out the voices I could mimic through effects (for example, the reverse-reverb-reverse trick I used for the passenger voices), once I actually got into Photoshop and started with layers, I realized how relevant working with Audacity was to building an understanding of modularity. The way effects could be applied to isolated clips was almost a perfect one-for-one for the way filters can be applied to individual visual layers, affording high levels of control. Realizing that connection helped me to lean on the platform’s visual representation of modularity (the layer-listing panel in Photoshop), similar to how I had learned to rely on Audacity’s visualization of how the audio clips layers and interacted with one another. I think by training my brain to think modularly in a realm so far out of my comfort zone was a good way to “jump into the deep end” from the start and really challenge any assumptions I had about digital media going in. Looking back on the course, I think the current order of projects is really effective.
Moving forward, I plan to continue developing my digital media skills with classes like Projects in Digital Composition (which I’m taking in the fall). I would like to expand on the Spoonie magazine cover project that I did for the unit consolidation, potentially making it into a full magazine. Outside of the classroom, I plan to work on a portfolio website this summer, to keep working on my HTML/CSS skills.
To directly introduce my projects, my soundscape played with the idea of “train of thought.” I worked with mixing pre-recorded sounds of various trains (stopping, starting, traveling, etc.) together to make one coherent train journey. I also recorded my own voice and manipulated those clips with different distorting effects (returning to the above point about modularity) to create different characters from one voice.
With my visual project, I wanted to make an argument for inclusive design. Working with the concept of visual rhythm, I used the icons matching in general style but differing in their depiction of their bodies to emphasize human variability and the subsequent necessity to design with the variability rather than making assumptions designing for it. As mentioned above, to try to practice what I was preaching, I spent the initial part of the project researching how to make work visually accessible, and there is a file with research notes featured in the repository.
For the website, I created a mock business website for a bookstore-café that my friend wants to open in the future. Here, modularity through CSS tools like z-index and Flexbox helped me format key elements like the typewriter image and the pinned sidebar images, to give the website the feel of a page being typed out and getting images stuck to it. Learning about the affordances of Flexbox definitely altered parts of my initial vision for the site, but it was to my advantage, as it helped the site ultimately be more responsive (like the navigation bar changing to flex-direction: column for small screens).
Lastly, with my unit consolidation project, I wanted to make something that practiced the visual argument unit’s skills, like font matching and visual hierarchy. I also wanted to work on my Photoshop skills with photographs, instead of graphics, which meant I expanded into new tool territory like layer masks, effect filters, and using an above layer to color a lower layer. The project ended up being in two parts. The first, my minimum deliverable idea, is made for an audience unfamiliar with chronic illness/the spoonie community, as a visual that includes reference to “The Spoon Theory“ essay. The second version incorporates that image into a mock magazine cover that is made more with the spoonie community in mind as the target audience.
Repository links: Soundscape: https://github.com/cap-alt-delete/soundscape2021spring Visual Rhetoric: https://github.com/cap-alt-delete/visual-argument-2021spring Website: https://github.com/cap-alt-delete/website-portfolio-2021spring Consolidation Project: https://github.com/cap-alt-delete/consolidation-unit-2021spring
The links to the repos are below:
Soundscape repo: https://github.com/reaial/soundscape2021spring.git Visual argument repo: https://github.com/reaial/visual-argument-2021spring.git website repo:https: https://github.com/reaial/website-portfolio-2021spring.git final repo: https://github.com/reaial/finalportfolio2021spring.git
The only edit that was made to the soundscape repo was fixing the credits so that you know that I was the one that made the music
This entire class has been a lot more fun, and informational than I expected it to be when I signed up for it last fall. There were a lot of things that I did not know prior to this class, and I am happy that I am leaving with these new tools. I was able to learn about things that I would not have before and in new forms of media that I had always wanted to explore, but have had the chance to do so. I am one that chooses to stay in my lane as far as the choice of arts that I use, and that is normally music. After this I am happy that I was able to finally learn photoshop, and how to create my own website using HTML.
The links to the final of each project are below:
soundscape final edit: soundscape.mp3
visual argument: photo 1- BLMvisualArgument.png
website: I removed from this repo, and moved to consolidation
consolidation: photo 2- BLMredoargument.psd photo 3- finalphoto.psd website: https://reaial.github.io/finalportfolio2021spring/#sidenav-open
In terms of what was the most successful, I do think that this would have to be my visual argument. Like I said above, I normally stay in my lane when it comes to different forms of art, but this is one that really turned out better than I had hoped or even expected. I really do think although there were only a few components here and there in each of the arguments presented then it was a less is more topic. Trying to reach the most powerful state with the least amount of work. The unit that I think held back on the most is my soundscape. Although I did make my own music for it, I do feel like I could have done a lot more to create and really amplify the way that life goes now a days during the pandemic. Maybe gathering more samples of audio, or even using something better to record them. I do feel like this is where I could've made improvement.
The projects inside of my portfolio I am proud of, and I think that now I was able to fix some things that were pointed out in my comments prior (visual argument). While I also think that I made it a little easier for consumers to come and interact with the medium that I was using (both the website and visual argument). I was really able to hone in on those aspirational requirements that I wanted for the website with the little bit of extra time that we were given for this unit. While I also think I hit a few more aspirational things for the visual argument as well with the other two that were added to the series.
In terms of the visual argument I was able to turn the one photo that I used at the start of the semester into a series. With that being said I took the feedback that I received from Ben specifically in order to make the text better, and find ways to make the other images that I am using stand out, and fit in without it seeming as though things have been cut off. While I also remembered the comments that my class mates made, and made sure to stick to what could appeal to those looking at it without the vision that I have in mind.
The with the final image you can see that I kept in the officers for a little more of an added effect to the argument that is going on here. I also think that the skilled that I honed in on was being able to use text as itself. In my first visual argument this gave me more issues than I thought it would, and in these last too I was able to incorporate them with ease, and provide slight detail to the simple project. Another skill that I was able to really enhance was using the select and mask tool. In the first object with the fist this gave me a lot of trouble from the start, and by the third argument, I did it with ease. I still have a lot to learn as far as PS goes, but I am glad I was given the opportunity to work on it. I enjoyed it a lot.
The website is also what I worked on in order to improve how it worked and how it looked visually. I was able to add different forms of media, fix the header like I wanted too, and add a comment section using the issues que! So, feel free to debate with me there, and interact with the website (its live!). While I was also able to finally get the spoiler feature to work ( while it is not a button) it still hides the material that I want it too.
With this the website is a little cleaner with a lot more whitespace to not take away from my reasoning for the ranking of the movies! I was hoping to get a sources in the footer set up so that there are no claims to the material and you can see it on the webpage, but in the end it seemed like building another page might be the way to go for right now with how much information is in the sources rtf.
As far as what surprised me about the class, it had to be that we did HTML, and not base level java. This is just because when I hear coding I instantly think Java. I do think that learning HTML was a lot of fun, but a little confusing from the other syntax that I had learned in the past with Java. I also did not think that the sound unit would be set up the way that it was. When I heard that we would be using the medium of sound I instantly thought of music. I really did enjoy what we did instead, it made me more aware of what was going on around me, and how it makes the particular mundane life we live feel more interesting. This is when we take the time to tune in to it. Lastly the visual argument was not what I thought it would be. I thought that we would be analyzing a particular argument, or all would have to do the same topic. All and all this entire class I was surprised at how it was structured in the way that made us have to be creative on our own, and you gave us the liberty to run with our ideas to see if they would land or not.
I know this really isn't technically content that was a huge huge deal, but learning Git! Since this website is free I will begin using this a lot more in terms of keeping my code up to date, and being able to collaborate when needed. While also just having somewhere that backs up all my files I am working on for something is very beneficial and I would have never heard or used it if it weren't for this class.
I will most likely continue to work on my skills with PS because I can see a job in the near future where I might need that. I also think that I will continue to learn CSS and HTML so that I know another two languages making it a little easier to say that I know those skills on my resume for digital media centered jobs. I do think what I will focus the most heavy on will have to be the HTML for now, especially because I do want to get a website up and running that houses information about me, while I also think that I might even work on making my hidden items into a small button. It sounds like it should work, and I have nothing better to do over the summer, so taking on that project should be interesting.
Lastly, I want to say thank you Ben for a great semester! You have been one of the best professors that I have had at Pitt, and I hope to have you in another one of my classes down the road.
I definitely have a much more extensive knowledge of digital media than I did at the beginning of the semester. This class really challenged me creatively in a way that none of the other classes I have taken at Pitt ever have. The generative writing exercises that we did in class helped me allow myself to take the time to slow down, think, and write. I want to carry this forward into my future coursework as well as into my career. Oftentimes when I feel stuck with a project, I fail to take the time that I need to think through it. This usually leads to more frustration, and I want to use generative writing during these moments. I have already implemented it when choosing a topic for my final paper in one of my Spanish courses, and it was very helpful.
I feel as though I have been most successful in my web creation, probably because this was the only media design form that I had prior experience with from a semester-long web design course in high school five years ago. I was the most excited about this project from the beginning of the semester, and I felt more comfortable challenging myself to learn as much as I could with HTML and CSS having some preliminary knowledge to work from.
I am very detail-oriented which translates into my work, and these smaller details are most of the things that I am the proudest of in each of my projects. For example, I loved the slight hammering sounds of elves working in my soundscape, the placement of the apple over the banana in my visual argument, the inverted colors on the buttons when hovered over on my website, and the rounded edges of the photo grid in my consolidation project. I am also very proud of my perseverance which led to my biggest improvement throughout the semester which was on my visual argument. From its preview and draft stages (pictured on the top) to the final product (pictured below), the product changed a lot (for the better). The preview from my commit is linked here, and the progression from preview to draft to final is shown in the image below. In this case, simplifying the design and going back to the basics of movement was very effective for me, especially since I am an over-thinker. This project made me face a lot of mental blocks in terms of creativity, and I really had to be patient with myself and not give up on the project. In the end, I really like my end product, and I think that it reflects the compositional skills that we learned in class in terms of contrast, movement, font choice, and visual rhythm.
The most surprising aspect of this course to me was the way that it challenged and sparked my creativity making me realize that this is rare in my coursework. As I have mentioned previously in class, most of the time we are just writing papers in Microsoft Office for our classes where words are our only creative tools. This class was surprising in that it made me realize that there are so many other platforms and tools that I can use to convey messages. Having the Resources page for this class was very helpful to direct me to websites where I could find legally usable sounds and images. The quick timelines were a bit challenging this semester, but hopefully next year we will be back on a normal schedule so you will not have to worry about another condensed semester.
Moving forward, I am not sure where I will directly use any of the digital media skills that I have developed over the semester, and I know that they will still serve me even if I never use Audacity or GIMP again. I will not be taking any more digital media courses, but I will still use these skills in other capacities. Having more creative outlets than I did at the beginning of the semester is a great asset for me in future courses and in my work opportunities. Rather than being limited to Microsoft Office software, I can now create websites or graphic arguments for my assignments if I want to! In fact, this semester, I was asked to create an infographic for my Theories of Persuasion class, and I submitted the visual argument I had made for this course. I got great feedback from my professor, and it was lovely to see how my new skills are already overlapping with other courses in ways that I would not have predicted. I also had the opportunity to choose to submit a paper or a PowerPoint presentation for an assignment in my health communication class this semester. I chose to create a PowerPoint assignment, and I used the compositional aspects that I learned in this class in that presentation like left-aligning my text, effectively combining visuals with words, and using color contrasts to draw the viewers' attention. I also learned a lot about Fair Use and Creative Commons Licenses which will likely come in handy in the future.
For this course, I completed four major projects: a soundscape, a visual argument, a website, and a consolidation project.
During our first generative writing exercise for the sound unit, I came up with the idea to bring listeners to Santa's Workshop in the North Pole. As mentioned above, I pay lots of attention to the smaller details, so things like picking out the song that the elves would be listening to in the workshop was very important to me. I had a lot of fun playing with different tools and effects in Audacity. The envelope tool was definitely a game-changer for me. I think that this project turned out very cute. My full repository is linked here.
My visual argument, as I mentioned earlier, was the most challenging project of the semester for me. However, I kept working with it until I liked how it looked, and I am glad that I did! You can see the movement and use of color in the designed photo above. My full repository is linked here.
This website was the most fun project for me this semester. With this project, I created a website with six HTML pages to review every class that I have taken at Pitt. It was a fun way to practice HTML and CSS and highlight some of the funny stories or accomplishments of my coursework at the University of Pittsburgh over the past three years. I am incredibly proud of this website. Click the image above to see the aforementioned buttons that invert their colors when they are hovered over on the webpages. My full repository is linked here.
For my final project, I wanted to continue to work on website creation since that was my favorite media form that we worked with this semester, and I also wanted to challenge myself in the visual design area by using tools that I had not tried out before on GIMP. To combine these, I decided to make a logo and website for a fake daycare, Caring Casa. When you visit my webpage, it may not seem like I did much visual editing for this project, but I did a lot of work on the logo to get it to its current state. The original photo of the house is located on the left, and the image on the right is my final logo. The house image is from Jacques Bopp from Unsplash. First, I removed the background using the intelligent scissors and eraser tools, and then I used the heal and clone tools to cover the railing on the stairs in front of the house as well as the plants in front of the house that went into the house's white paint. I made myself not take too much time trying to do this since it was just for the logo which would never be large enough for people to see it closely on my website. This was difficult for me, as a perfectionist, and I think it serves its purpose well in its current state even if it is not completely perfect. I then drew a heart behind the house to give it the child-like effect that a real daycare would have in their logo. For the coding portion of the website, I also challenged myself with some aspects that I had not tried before like using JavaScript, making a photo grid, embedding a calendar and a map, adding a footer, putting in a form, vertically aligning text with an image, and putting text on top of a photo. I hit a road bump with this project when I lost my first full draft trying to upload it to GitHub with GitHub Desktop (I guess these are two other platforms I need to continue learning). After having a bit of a breakdown over all of the work that I had lost, I got most of the previous work that I had done on the website redone within two or three hours of work. I am very proud of myself for pulling it together, and this experience let me see all that I had learned in HTML and CSS by having to redo it. The aspects that had taken me days of trial and error to figure out like how to implement JavaScript into HTML or silly mistakes like forgetting to put the image folder name before the photograph name on img elements did not go to waste because it was much easier for me to pull on what I had learned. I am very proud of the end product, and I could still spend weeks working on it and tweaking a few things to try to make it perfect. I think that it was the perfect project to end the semester with by culminating the skills that I learned throughout the course of the semester across each of the prior four units. My full repository is linked here.
Overall, I am ending the semester very proud of the work that I put into this class and very happy with the skills that I am leaving with. Thanks, everyone, for a great semester!
In my original letter to myself at the beginning of the semester, I knew that I was excited to take this class until I saw the third assignment, coding. Coding has always been something I have written off as a skill I would never be able to develop. But it wasn’t just coding that I was worried about as I often felt this way throughout each project. I thought my ideas were too obscure, would be too hard, or just wouldn’t work. I tried to keep in mind some advice from my dad throughout the class. Whenever I would call my dad and tell him I was feeling nervous about everything going on, he would always pose the question, “how do you eat an elephant?” The first time he posed this question, I was confused but he explained that with big tasks you need to look at them in pieces, not the entire elephant. Although I’ve never wanted to eat an elephant, I kept this advice in the back of my mind. Using this mindset helped me focus on the project at hand rather than worry about something that would happen later in the semester. For example, with the soundscape, I started to find that with every addition of sound, I became more confident in my digital media skills which would then translate to new confidence for the next project. This is also seen on my Photoshop project. I was nervous about how the project was going to look in the end. Instead, I started looking at each aspect of the picture with Cameron, the background, the quote, and so on rather than the entire project which was more manageable.
But then, the day that I had been dreading the most came and I had to start considering a website that I could create. Even though I was still nervous, I was able to concentrate on each element of the website and eventually created a project that I was proud of. The advice of focusing on one element rather than the entire project helped me create a timeline for when I wanted to have certain elements complete as well as have small victories. This advice proved very helpful in several ways because I would be able to consider different layers for each assignment. With the soundscape, I had to think specifically about each layer of sound that I would need to transport people back to a packed movie theatre. Then I had to think about each layer with Photoshop to bring my message featuring Cameron Frye alive. Then, when I created a website, I needed to consider each
Along with this style of thinking, I learned about some new tools from this class that I will have to keep in mind when I create digital media in the future. Tools like Audacity, Codepen, Creative Commons, Unsplash, and Freesound were very helpful in each project I used these tools. I’ve used these tools for other classes when I needed royalty-free music or non-copyright pictures too.
Using modular thinking was something that enabled me to have several successes throughout the semester, but these victories were overshadowed by my skills with coding. The fact that I willingly made another website from code for a final project is the biggest success that I was not expecting from this class. Not only did I code another website, but I also tried out grids and learned how to do them when I was completely happy with using flexboxes. I learned how to create a grid and use the Inspect element on Firefox to see how each Grid would line up. I also used the transform function and have a better understanding of media queries now. If you visit my website and the browser is not big enough, you will be asked to make it bigger for a better experience. When I coded my first website, I tried to make it responsive, but I was unclear about what I was doing. Now, I honestly think I could go back and update it to make it better.
Abby's Bookshelf:
I wish I had my first project that I made for my Web Design class because there is such a difference in each project (but just try to imagine an Alice Blue webpage about social media). Although I don’t have my original coding project, I do have screenshots from my first attempt at coding compared to the final project. The tutorial, “Interneting Isn’t Hard” was an important tool that led to my success in this project.
First Attempt:
Let's Talk Sustainably Final Project:
For my final project, I also made small fixes to my projects, specifically my sustainability website and my ASSETS files. I made sure that my websites had a better load speed by compressing the images (I even tested it out online). Additionally, I made sure that everything was credited correctly, including the quote from Ferris Bueller's Day Off. (The following speed test is from my Abby's Bookshelf Website).
In general, I would also say the fact that I continued to challenge myself with each project is a success for me. This semester felt like I was always working since I have two part-time jobs, I was the Vice President of my fraternity, and still had a normal workload. But I didn’t let those other commitments prevent me from challenging myself in this class and learning how to compose digital media. Each time there was a barrier that shook my confidence, I would do some research to get past those issues, or more commonly, I would talk to Ben after class or during office hours. I found that talking through issues was more helpful than just struggling with them myself. The aspirational goals and baseline criteria also helped me through the challenges I was facing. Such challenges included making Cameron look down at a phone without having cellphones in the 80s. I had to take images from the movie, reference images, and often painted parts of the picture that were missing. I used the brush tool to create Cameron’s pants and the blur tool to make them look more realistic as seen in the following progress shot.
Despite these successes, there were problems throughout these projects. The biggest hardship that I dealt with during this class was trying to sort out my ideas and get started. Some helpful advice I received for this problem was from Ben. He advised that I should remember to take a step back to come up with my vision. I often felt overwhelmed with all the directions I could go for each project. In particular, this final project was overwhelming since it could have been any of the platforms we used throughout the year. However, Ben’s advice about taking a step back and creating lists of interests, passions, and so forth was helpful. I know I spent a lot of time talking through ideas with Ben during office hours or after class, but this technique proved to be super helpful. I was able to use this technique in each project without even realizing that I was doing that necessarily. This is something I will keep with me as I continue to compose digital media. Rather than letting myself get overwhelmed with all the potential options, I’m going to create lists and use them to focus my creativity rather than let it get the better of me.
During this class, I think I was most surprised by the freedom I had with each project. Usually, there are so many requirements that dictate the content for each project. However, with this class, it almost felt like the requirements were built around the project we choose. Although at first, this felt overwhelming, I was able to use my creativity to create a piece of media I loved and was proud of. I was also happily surprised that I didn’t have to work on a group project over Zoom but still had the chance to talk to people about projects in breakout rooms. I’ve done a lot of Zoom group projects this year and having one less group project was appreciated. I don’t think there are any suggestions for revising the structure or assignments since they were all straightforward.
Moving forward, I plan to continually update my final project, “Abby’s Bookshelf,” with books as I finish each one. I hopefully will finish several of the books this summer and will have more pages to add. Additionally, I want to learn about the other Adobe Creative Platforms so I can use them to create digital media in the future. Specifically, I hope to utilize LinkedIn Learning to learn more about Adobe Creative apps. Moreover, this summer one thing I’ve wanted to do is redesign or design my own board game. I plan on using Photoshop to create the game piece elements. I’ve also had the opportunity to use my digital media skills for other classes like my Filmmaking 1 class when I added music to my visuals that help tell the story of a lonely Zoom University Student. I know there will be additional opportunities to continue developing my digital media skills and I’m excited to think through other projects for the summer and the future.
Repository Links (Click the Images to see the final versions, i.e. mp3, png, live web page) Soundscape: https://github.com/aer84/soundscape2021spring.git
Visual Argument: https://github.com/aer84/visual-argument-2021spring.git
Website Portfolio: https://github.com/aer84/website-portfolio-2021spring.git
Final Project: https://github.com/aer84/abbys-bookshelf.git
“You can’t learn to play piano just by reading about the piano; why should we expect any differently about writing in any form?” That was a quote from Doug Hesse, one that was included in the Welcome Letter to this class and one that I think really sums up the skill that I have learned from this class that I will be applying to all my future endeavors (not just those in design or writing either). When it comes to building things in the digital media space the best way to learn is to do it. I found myself stalling on the website project because while I read all the tutorials and handouts, I was hesitant to actually get my hands dirty and start trying out what I read. It actually took me coding most of my website and having it not work for some of the layout aspects of HTML to ever click. While it was tougher to go out and do instead of just reading, I never would’ve understood anything if I had simply read the tutorials and then filled out a template.
That specific lesson is one that is going to stick with me, but certainly doesn’t reflect everything I have learned over the course of this…course. Looking back at the course outcomes on the syllabus reminds me just how much I was able to accomplish this semester. One course outcome that sticks out to me is “revise in response to their own reflections and feedback from peers and the teacher.” If I’m being honest, most of my college career has been spent turning in first drafts of papers and projects and never really bothering to look them over or revise them. This class has changed that and has shown me just how much better my work can be if I take the time to get other to look at it, critique it, and be open to suggestions. This was particularly the case with my visual argument project. I was stuck in a creative rut for the majority of the project and what I turned in for the peer comment portion of the class was not something I was particularly proud of. In most classes that didn’t offer this peer feedback time I would’ve just turned in the project as it was to get it out of the way. However, here I was actually really excited to receive feedback and revise my work, because I knew I could do better. By the end of it, thanks to comments by classmates and my own willingness to accept the criticism, I created something that was both better than the original and something I was proud of. I changed the perspective of the image, the background, the font, the size of the images and words, and the general layout of the design. This total overhaul never would’ve happened without feedback. Here is my first draft and my final project to show just how much that revision helped.
Click here to see the comments that helped make it better.
The most challenging part of this course was spending the time to learn how to use the different mediums to accomplish what I wanted. It could be a little frustrating at times when I would think of something I would want to add to the project (particularly for the visual argument and the website) and not be able to execute it without a lot of trial and error, googling, and reading. What helped me overcome this was how interesting it was to learn how to use new features of each program and how fulfilling it was to be able to use a digital space to help creative visions come to life. Even though there is a learning curve that can at times be steep, I never would've been able to accomplish what I did without finding harmony with digital programs.
I wouldn’t say anything really surprised me about the course (thanks to what I would say was the easiest to understand course outline a teacher has ever provided). The only real revision I would suggest is maybe allotting one more week for the website tutorial homework. I found myself learning some things in the tutorial later than I needed them. As I was working to turn in my first draft, I would struggle to implement a feature and get it to only kind of work, and then see all that time I spent figuring it out could’ve been saved if I was a little further along in the tutorial. I’m not sure how this could be helped because the course can’t get any longer but maybe recommending doing a few more lessons a week would help.
I’m excited to continue to use the skills I’ve learned in this class far into the future! I’m definitely going to work on my website and want to use it as a space where I can share the things I do with the world. I also can think of a few other websites I might want to build (I’m thinking about making one for the Spikeball club here at Pitt). I won’t just use website design in the future though. The skills I have picked up with Audacity will continue to help me make the podcasts I work on better and more immersive. Working with photoshop has definitely strengthened my grasp on visual design concepts and being able to do things like make posters and logos will always come in handy.
That’s what I hope to do, now I can introduce what I have already done!
My soundscape was based on a walk I took at the beginning of junior year. It was an impromptu adventure that me and my roommates took that ended up being really impactful for me and something that I still reflect on to this day. In the soundscape, I wanted to take the listener on that same walk by narrating the steps I took and adding sounds from the world around me at each stop I made. The narration was split up and when the sounds of the stops played there was no narration, so that the listener could lose themselves in the scene crafted by the sound and gain their own insight while listening.
Soundscape Repository: https://github.com/Gley21/soundscape2021spring
My visual argument stemmed from my love of philosophy. I wanted to make a fun image that shared how I believe that studying philosophy helps unlock your mind and open up a new way of thinking. Reflective of that idea was my use of the word "philosokey" to make the image of the key. Same thing with making the brain the lock itself, I wanted to show different ways that thinking outside the box could reveal themselves in the image.
Visual Argument Repository: https://github.com/Gley21/visual-argument-2021spring
The idea for my website came from an idea I had awhile back that I never was able to actually do because I never knew how to make a website, so the timing of this project was perfect. I wanted to build a space where I could share my thoughts and my work and take people along as I grow and change as a person. That's really the central idea for the site, growing and changing and sharing that. I wanted to make three separate pages focused on what could be thought of as the three aspects of a person: heart, soul, and mind. On each page there is content appropriate to each aspect of a person and people can check out where each part of me is at a certain point in time.
Website Repository: https://github.com/Gley21/website-portfolio-2021spring
GitHub Pages: https://gley21.github.io/website-portfolio-2021spring/
My consolidation project ended up being two parts. The first part was my original plan of making a website for a poem I wrote in memory of Mac Miller. I wanted a place to display it and give the words a little more life than what they had just in a word doc and I felt the website was a perfect place to do that. It also gave me an opportunity to try out some JavaScript, something that I never got around to trying out on the original website project. It took a long time to get the hang of how Java worked but once I figured out how to add jQuery to the site I was able to find some sample code that helped me achieve the effect I wanted which was fading in text as you scrolled through the site. I used some code from a tutorial to achieve the fade in, but then I edited myself to also add the fade out effect once you scroll past an element. I also was able to add a script enabled button at the end of the poem that takes the user back to the top of the page and refresh it so that they can read the poem again.
Consolidation Repository: https://github.com/Gley21/mac-miller-poem
GitHub Pages: https://gley21.github.io/mac-miller-poem/
The second part consisted of some small edits to my original website project that Ben recommended. I changed the max width for the page that it didn't extend edge to edge and get too big when the screen size goes up. I also added alt text for the images and credited my sister more directly for her work in my repo. I also added two simple media queries that changed the flex direction of two elements to column and it fixed an issue where one of my playlist iFrames would disappear on smaller screens. I didn't have time to do it, but I'm also going to look at how to use Jekyll to create a blog that is local to the page and I hope to continue to work on the site after class.
The consolidation project really helped me get my feet wet in the world of adding JavaScript to a website. It took a ton of time to actually understand how it worked, why something like jQuery is extremely helpful and makes your life easier, and how it can make a website really interactive. I got a chance to use a brand-new aspect of website design in my project and that was really exciting. I feel like this was a successful consolidation project because I took the design ideas we learned throughout the course and used what the medium of web design provided me to build the site. I used JavaScript as a unique way to focus the reader's attention on individual stanzas as I faded them in and out of view. The colors I chose came from a poster that I have from Mac's Circles album to tie the website both together as one page and in with this work. I also wanted to give the website a slight soundscape aspect too it which is why I included the link to the playlist of songs I reference in the poem. This way the reader could read a stanza, and then go listen to the song to get a sense of where Mac himself was at the moment in time I refer to.
The website revisions, while slight, again helped me try out something new with using media queries. It also gave me another opportunity to respond to feed-back on my work, something I now actually look forward to quite a bit.
This was one of the most rewarding classes I have taken at Pitt. The combination of learning new things and then executing them to create projects that would've been beyond my abilities in the past was a really awesome thing. Thank you Ben for helping make this an awesome semester, and thank you everyone for making this class great! If you happen to read this, good luck wherever you are headed and don't forget to take a walk every once in a while.
This course has shown me a lot of new ways to digest and create different forms of media. From what I believe was the very first class or so, we visited the “Playing Manovich” website. After the discussion we had about the key affordances in class, I started to open my eyes to the language of new digital media. One thing that really stuck out to me the most from this resource was the idea of modularity, or how every piece of the media is created by manipulating numerous components individually and how they all come together in the end in the “big picture”. This idea was very prevalent in all of the units that we went over in class. Similarly, when we were doing the visual argument unit, we also visited Julie Thompson’s short lessons in graphic design which shed light on some graphic design vocabulary that I have heard before, just never actually understood exactly what they meant. Additionally, the peer evaluations of each other’s projects really helped me see all of these different aspirations and features that were part of each project. This was not even specifically the feedback that I was given but having the ability to see what others were doing and breaking apart their projects helped me understand the different components of composing digital media. I hope to be bringing this with me in my future digital media composition, and I noticed that I have already started to take mental notes about the different components that I see demonstrated in other people's work. Throughout the composition of each of the projects, there were a couple of hurdles I had to jump over to discover where my strengths and weaknesses were in the media world. Something that was easy for me was having an idea for what I want to do for the project (big picture) and visualizing how I want the final product to look like. What got challenging was figuring out exactly how I needed to get the final product. Obviously, there are many smaller intricacies (solidifying the idea of modularity) that are glued together in the final product. This is also where I found myself becoming obsessed with the small details in the projects. Sometimes I would spend too much time trying to perfect these small details that I would take away from time to be used toward the big picture of each project. If I had more time on some of these projects I would be able to have these little details perfected to my liking, but obviously, in curriculum mode, we are restricted on how much time we can spend on everything. This would not be a challenge, it would actually be a strength, in any future projects that I am working on (assuming I have more time to work on them). Having a set baseline criterion allowed me to get on track with each of the projects because this was my original goal to meet, but the aspirational criteria were where I was able to really express my understanding of the medium expression. I was surprised at how much I enjoyed digging into the aspirational criteria, rather than just submitting the project to just get a grade. At these points, I really wanted to demonstrate more with my projects because I became really engaged in whatever software we were using. If I only made my projects align with the baseline criteria, they would just be kind of boring in my opinion. Maybe I am considering the aspirational criteria also to be more than just a grade, but rather a way to express my creativity and imagination in the project. Please enjoy the contents of my final portfolio for this class. It consists of a soundscape ("Quintessential Getaway"), a visual argument ("FowardWithFuture"), a website ("Structural Engineering"), and another final consolidated project ("Stonk Market").
In regards to modularity, my soundscape was a clear representation of just how important all of the little pieces are in the "big picture" of things. Each of the small recordings were all tweaked to deliver a fluid final production. There were some suggestions from my classmates that allowed me to stitch the transitions together to make the piece sound very good. If you close your eyes you actually feel like you are going on a mini-vacation to the beach! The longer tracks seen in the following image were typically external sounds that served as the "background" to the "foreground" or the main narrative of the soundscape. In combination with the tweaking of individual track volumes and stereo location (L/R), I was really able to distinguish the meaning of dominance and hierarchy within the piece.
I have only ever used the photo editing software GIMP to resize images to put into reports prior to this class. In the visual argument below I wanted it to be known that whatever happened in the past does not affect your future. This does not only apply to negative things either, this also applies to positive things as well. I was able to do this by creating an image where you are almost quite literally looking into both the past and the future. The past in this case is distorted and the distance is much greater than it is to the near future because it is impossible to go to the past, and if you keep heading in that direction you will be stuck there for a while. I used a series of hierarchies along with positive and negative space to enhance the meaning of the image. Some comments from my classmates included flipping the character on the right to be facing the future rather than looking back on the past. Once again highlighting the importance of the small details that contribute to the big picture.
Prior to this class, I have had some exposure to HTML and javascript from another intro to computational analysis class that I had taken freshmen year here at Pitt. That being said I have never formatted any page with CSS stylesheets or have I used javascript for anything more than a simple form to make calculations for areas, etc. I think that this project is where I began to show some of my strengths as well. Part of the reason why I am in Civil Engineering is that I am a very technical and analytical person, which was perfect for this project. I really started to dig into javascript more here and also focused on the idea of the flow of attention for the viewer. In HTML and CSS there is a very important distinction between hierarchy and dominance. What do I want the viewers to see first? In this case, I wanted them to see structures. The large image of Pittsburgh is probably the first thing that the viewer sees next is probably the header with the truss. All of these elements are customizable as well, the user can choose which color they want and if they want it to be in dark mode or light mode (all done with JS). The Interneting is hard to resource allowed me to step back into the world of HTML and further my understanding of how modular a webpage can be while maintaining the importance of an overall theme!
Please use this Link to see the website in action.
This project, which I am most proud of, is where all of what I have learned in this class was able to come together. I paired the two units of the website portfolio and the visual argument together to really put my skills to the test. When someone first visits this website they are greeted with awesome animations of stock charts traveling across the screen from one computer to another with advanced javascript coding. I really became addicted to javascript and I am VERY comfortable using it now. In the website portfolio, it was a challenge for me to get used to the new syntax and everything. Something that I am shocked at is that I built this program from scratch! I did not take any template online, other than some areas where I needed to do research on a particular element that I wanted to include.
I also highlighted the use of visuals in this project, as it is actually primarily a visual-based project and more of an interactive image that is available online. I recognized how important it is to find resources that you are legally allowed to use, and if there is nothing out there that you want to use, you can create it yourself! The logo that says "Stonk Market" was completely drawn by me using the ProCreate app I bought on my iPad (specifically for this project actually haha). You can see below how I was able to modify all of the images to suit my website. I also very distinctly established hierarchy in the elements. This was done by creating the various layers on GIMP and then ordering them with "z-index" on CSS. Of course, I want to distinguish the use of modularity in this project. There are SO MANY elements on just this one page that work together to serve as one application.
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PS: In addition to the portfolio, or as preparation for it, please do take the Tech Comfort Survey – among other things, it will give you a space to officially let me know whether and how I can use your work as an example for students in future semesters.