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Java / Scala back-end for Onfleet replacement
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Update SMS Text #11

Closed demant closed 8 years ago

demant commented 8 years ago

A couple minor changes:

OLD: Your Bento has arrived. Look for the green flags & meet the server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

NEW: Your Bento has arrived, woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

vcardillo commented 8 years ago

If you want to be grammatically correct, there should be either a period or a semi-colon after "arrived":

Your Bento has arrived; woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

Your Bento has arrived. Woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

On Fri, Jan 8, 2016 at 1:41 PM, Jason Demant notifications@github.com wrote:

A couple minor changes:

OLD: Your Bento has arrived. Look for the green flags & meet the server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

NEW: Your Bento has arrived, woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub https://github.com/bentocorp/houston/issues/11.

vcardillo commented 8 years ago

Or an emdash.

On Fri, Jan 8, 2016 at 8:49 PM, Vincent Cardillo vcardillo@gmail.com wrote:

If you want to be grammatically correct, there should be either a period or a semi-colon after "arrived":

Your Bento has arrived; woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

Your Bento has arrived. Woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

On Fri, Jan 8, 2016 at 1:41 PM, Jason Demant notifications@github.com wrote:

A couple minor changes:

OLD: Your Bento has arrived. Look for the green flags & meet the server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

NEW: Your Bento has arrived, woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub https://github.com/bentocorp/houston/issues/11.

demant commented 8 years ago

This works: Your Bento has arrived. Woot! Look for car with the green flags & please meet your server curbside. Thanks and enjoy your meal!

marcdoan commented 8 years ago

Speaking of grammar, you guys were so focused on the "woot" that I think you missed an article in the second sentence :stuck_out_tongue: Should it be: Look for the car with the green flags...?

demant commented 8 years ago

Lol...good catch.

vcardillo commented 8 years ago

Is this done? Let's close out stuff that's done.

marcdoan commented 8 years ago

This is being released with Order Ahead

marcdoan commented 8 years ago

This has been released.