I suggest you change the text from "Theoretically, it is possible to compress a series of alarms into fewer incidents. " to "It is possible to compress a series of alarms into fewer incidents and there are many solutions in the market today that essentially do this to some degree. "
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billwuqin
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7 months ago
Nigel said: " https://github.com/lllyfeng/incident-management/blob/f641fd7da4064bf05bbe4d8d5fab29229bb3d5e3/draft-feng-opsawg-incident-management-01.txt#LL152C42-L153C56
I suggest you change the text from "Theoretically, it is possible to compress a series of alarms into fewer incidents. " to "It is possible to compress a series of alarms into fewer incidents and there are many solutions in the market today that essentially do this to some degree. " "