formatting is missing/incorrect markup (e.g., lines 23-26 should be a numbered list, I think?). Line 56 should be a block quote but it's not. There may be other items to check.
The excerpt has some good introductory points but I'd prefer to see the it mention what this particular article is actually about.
Ignore this other pull request as it is deprecated: https://github.com/bisq-network/bisq-website/pull/183