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getting started post #10

Closed leboem closed 3 years ago

leboem commented 3 years ago

There is still an image missing

leboem commented 3 years ago

Overall very good.

Some comments (see below).

General:

* Most of the time I saw "we", but there was also one section (the computer parts) where you used "I".

  * Try to stick with one.

Let's talk about we and I again. Sometime I makes sense. Sometimes We