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bjoerngiesler / BB-R2_STEM_ESP32

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Workshop assembly instruction #1

Open Maciej-droid opened 2 months ago

Maciej-droid commented 2 months ago

Instruction for workshops. To shorten the duration of workshops some parts are glued (pins in legs and battery boxes). Electronics have a motherboard for safer and faster installation.

tvincent73 commented 2 months ago

Hi! This is excellent. A few suggested English grammar changes: Page 1 - Serie should be Series Page 2 - Comma at end of PH1x100 should be a period All references to Fold/Folded/Folding be Assemble/Assembled/Assembling? Page 16 - "Only fits with the subtitles facing up." Should be: "Only fits with the text facing up." Page 17 - Brown wires go OUTSIDE! Page 18 - "You will receive the droid's battery after correct connection verification." should be "You will receive the droid's battery after it has been verified that the connections are correct." Page 20 - "After launching the Dabble app, connect the battery to the droid's electronics and place its head on the body." Should be "After launching the Dabble app, connect the battery to the droid's electronics and place its head onto the body."

Maciej-droid commented 2 months ago

Oh thank you. I will correct it. English is not my language. I'm learning it all the time and sometimes I'm using a translator. So as you can see the translator is not good enough :)

tvincent73 commented 2 months ago

Your English is excellent and your ability to break the assembly down into easy-to-follow steps is even better!