bnroths / MACS30200proj

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Peer review by Xingyun #4

Open xywu-soc opened 7 years ago

xywu-soc commented 7 years ago

Hi Ben,

Your research question is very interesting & like the style of your poster! The colors make it look clean. And you make very good description of data by maps, and of model by formulas. And it's good to provide very concise words to describe the maps and guide people to look at your paper for further detail.

Just one question: what do the maps mean? As a reader neither familiar to the topic nor knowing much about spatial analysis, the description may be too concise for me to understand their purpose & connection.

Xingyun