Hi @Ajoke23 thanks for starting on this. I do have a couple of suggestions:
I think the paragraph about Peter and I can be dropped, it's not especially interesting history :)
Visuals are a good way to capture people's attention, perhaps the post could present a small selection of impressive plots to give an idea of the range of things bokeh can do, in a quick visual way?
Similarly, it's probably good to focus people's attention with some concrete code examples, even just snippets, to help them set some initial expecations for what using bokeh is actually like
Here is the draft link to my first blog series on "Introduction to Bokeh" https://medium.com/@ajokeyusuf10/introduction-to-bokeh-bokeh-blog-series-1-eb1aec87ad18