philiparola
commented
6 years ago There are a few technical things that I will deal with, such as a unified header/footer, and image optimization.
However, in terms of content, there's still a ways for you to go:
- Again, there are major problems with professionalism throughout. Too much slang, too conversational, and many grammar, spelling, and syntax mistakes.
- I would certainly remove the contact info for minors. Maybe just Bob's phone number, but even then, ask him.
- Again, the diversity comment is off-putting. Get feedback from the rest of the team to see how they feel about it.
is this how you do it?