Improve railsgirls content strategy

[borisrorsvort]

Demo: http://fireman-rolls-60402.bitballoon.com/rails-girls/

• [x] Copy reviewed (by abelar_s)

[oana-sipos]

@borisrorsvort small suggestion: you are saying ”Our goal is to give enough tools to these women” — but there was no reference to women before, so something seems to be missing / or to be too much. I would keep it simple and say just ”Our goal is to give enough tools to women”.

[borisrorsvort]

@oana-sipos your suggestion this uses women ^^ Maybe I should replace it with girls

[otagi]

@borisrorsvort Isn't "women" preferable? (or is my joke radar off?)

[oana-sipos]

@borisrorsvort the problem in your sentence was not women : P it was these women, which sounded rather rude : P I would keep women or even use Silvana's suggestion (on slack). So, bluntly:

Rails Girls was born in Finland, but is nowadays a global, non-profit volunteer community. Our goal is to give enough tools to girls and women to understand technology and provide them with a loveable community to help them build their ideas.

[borisrorsvort]

@oana-sipos https://github.com/brug-be/rubybelgium/commit/e2ddc3e12b29d37acbc6d5f49a1151292aa9a7ee