Bunny's QC for 80fd543

[Bunny5390]

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• [x] 1:00, 1:04, 2:18 and 2:20: Should the first Wows and Gos here be capitalised when the rest of the romaji isn't anywhere?

• [x] 4:05: British spelling here, is that on purpose?

• [x] 4:27: I forget what we decided on this, is "foreign substances entering the body from outside" redundant?

• [x] 8:12: I remember the second sentence here being discussed but I don't remember a verdict being reached. Don't the platelets adhere to each other as well as the vascular endothelial cells? Is the clumping together part enough?

• [x] 9:39: Should there be an adverb of degree before incompetent here? eg. "because I'm so incompetent"

Typesetting

• [x] 13:08 and 13:14: Colour slightly too light and blur too high?

• [x] 20:13: Text and border colours seem a bit too light here for all four yays.

[rcombs]

TS:

• Should be "hemoglobin"
• Foreign/outside: it's technically redundant but sounds fairly natural, so I'm fairly ambivalent.
• Hemostasis: change "underneath" to "beneath"; otherwise I think this is fine.

[bucket3432]

Signing off and closing on behalf of @Bunny5390.