Here are my edits to the first two sections. I believe the intro is not complete, but at least it doesn't look empty. I have also made a handful of edits to the literature review. Please look through these diffs and make sure they are coherent and that you can see why I recommended the change.
Here are my edits to the first two sections. I believe the intro is not complete, but at least it doesn't look empty. I have also made a handful of edits to the literature review. Please look through these diffs and make sure they are coherent and that you can see why I recommended the change.