cagov / covid19

This is the official COVID19 response website for the state of California.
https://covid19.ca.gov/
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covid19.ca.gov- PD feedback- Clean up #133

Closed abquirarte closed 2 years ago

abquirarte commented 4 years ago

We've collated our feedback and some advice for the covid-19 website which I've copied below. Please take these as suggestions - we don't know your context well enough and understand you have many constraints. We think the site is brilliant and you're doing a great job.

Consider changing the way you’re structuring your content

Switch ordering of content

On content style, we think the guide is great and the sentence length and tone you’re using is spot on. Some of the pages could still do with more work on that front, e.g. the Get Financial Help page still uses quite technical language.

Navigation

Reduce amount of emphasis on pages so as to not overwhelm reader

Search

Add similes / plain language Some terms have no clear matches “find food bank” - it may be that the State doesn’t/can’t provide that information

If most users still come from outside or seem to be confused by results, it may be better to have no search at all on the site and deprioritise that work.

hilaryhb commented 4 years ago

@abquirarte

The above PD feedback is great and I am a +1 on all things they say. In addition, I would consider the following changes:

abquirarte commented 4 years ago

@coreycaitlin if you can + on any of these, it will help me prioritize :)

abquirarte commented 4 years ago

Is it still comforting calming? Or does it add to the chaos? latest news have the clickable headline and take out the summary text underneath Central FAQ (?) - or headings in questions? More plain language in the service and info pages Translate/Search more prominent- blends in with blue

abquirarte commented 4 years ago

162 clean up:

coreycaitlin commented 4 years ago

[removed comment that belongs on another issue]

m-sullivan7 commented 2 years ago

Closing this issue as will not do.