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Core library for KNX network access and management
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Update README.md #76

Closed DerekRoy closed 5 years ago

DerekRoy commented 5 years ago

Hello,

I am a technical writing student, and found your github via a search for java. I read your document, and made some technical writing suggestions. These edits are meant to clear up any ambiguity by taking a more active voice, and removing confusing pronouns like "it" where possible. I hope they are helpful.

Thanks, Derek

bmalinowsky commented 5 years ago

Thank you for your updates to the readme!

One thing I did not change: I think that "implemented in software" is a quite common phrase, compared to "software implemented".