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Overview / Figure 1 to describe PheKnowLator is now complete! @LEHunter @bill-baumgartner @mgkahn, what do you think (click to enlarge image)?
Four comments by Kahn
Four comments by Kahn
Thanks for the detailed feedback @mgkahn , the comment bubbles were super clear! Responding to your comments left to right:
obo
there. That's a good point. Or, can I update the example to use other namespaces in addition to obo
. Would that be more clear? The updated figure for comments 2 and 3 is included below:
For semantic abstraction: If there are alternatives (maybe implied by two downward arrows), then maybe show two different result graph structures at the end of each downward arrow. Confusing why you have two arrows leading to the single result graph.
For Annotation/Normalization: No way I would have gotten what you described from the figure but perhaps somebody who knows the ontologies would understand. But this figure it supposed to "speak" to the unknowledgeable so give some thought to another way of capturing what you wrote. This figure doesn't work for the uneducated.
And its @mgkahn , not @LEHunter who is the uneducated one here.
For semantic abstraction: If there are alternatives (maybe implied by two downward arrows), then maybe show two different result graph structures at the end of each downward arrow. Confusing why you have two arrows leading to the single result graph.
For Annotation/Normalization: No way I would have gotten what you described from the figure but perhaps somebody who knows the ontologies would understand. But this figure it supposed to "speak" to the unknowledgeable so give some thought to another way of capturing what you wrote. This figure doesn't work for the uneducated.
And its @mgkahn , not @LEHunter who is the uneducated one here.
Sorry about the confusion in my last post. I accidentally tagged Larry when I meant to tag you. OK, the next pass on the figure is attached below. I have updated the semantic abstraction section to address the fact the double arrow problem. I can see how that was confusing. I will have to think about the annotation/normalization part. I think this is an important contribution that is provided so I don't want to remove that section, but I hear what you are saying about it not being sufficient for someone without domain knowledge. I can follow-up with Larry, he might have some other ideas.
fyi - My comments are based on the previous version of the figure as I didn't see this new one in time.
fyi - My comments are based on the previous version of the figure as I didn't see this new one in time.
Thanks @bill-baumgartner for the additional feedback! I will respond to the comments as they are organized by each square on the figure. Hope you can read it OK 😄
OK updated figure below to reflect your suggestions. better?
Got some additional great feedback from @mgkahn and @LEHunter. Will be working those changes today.
@mgkahn and @LEHunter -- please updated figure with your requested changes. Note that there is still some light wordsmithing needed, specifically around how to refer to the output that's generated by the ecosystem/system/platform. Our goal is to make sure we convey that there are multiple kinds of/multimodal output generated. Otherwise, all other changes have been made. Thanks again for your feedback, I think it's really coming along nicely.
Without your previous explanation, I still do not "get" Concept Annotation from the diagram. Maybe we just move on. The rest of the figure is good. Like how you redid Semantic Abstraction.
Without your previous explanation, I still do not "get" Concept Annotation from the diagram. Maybe we just move on. The rest of the figure is good. Like how you redid Semantic Abstraction.
Thank you for taking another look at it. I'm happy to keep thinking about ways to improve the Concept Annotation square. I do think your feedback this week has helped to improve it. I don't think this resolve your concerns, but I did slightly update that part in the version below. Will stop fiddling now see what Larry and Bill think as well.
Time to move onto other higher priority tasks........
@LEHunter and @bill-baumgartner I will close this issue, please re-open if there are additional changes you would like made to the figure.
One last comment. I like the rearrangement, but wish there were a way to continue the arrows running left to right across the top. I didn’t even see the arrow pointing from KG construction to generated output at first. Maybe move the endpoints and benchmarks below generated output, and run one arrow down the right edge?
On Apr 17, 2021, at 8:49 AM, Tiffany J. Callahan @.***> wrote:
Without your previous explanation, I still do not "get" Concept Annotation from the diagram. Maybe we just move on. The rest of the figure is good. Like how you redid Semantic Abstraction.
Thank you for taking another look at it. I'm happy to keep thinking about ways to improve the Concept Annotation square. I do think your feedback this week has helped to improve it. I don't think this resolve your concerns, but I did slightly update that part in the version below. Will stop fiddling now see what Larry and Bill think as well.
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One last comment. I like the rearrangement, but wish there were a way to continue the arrows running left to right across the top. I didn’t even see the arrow pointing from KG construction to generated output at first. Maybe move the endpoints and benchmarks below generated output, and run one arrow down the right edge? … On Apr 17, 2021, at 8:49 AM, Tiffany J. Callahan @.***> wrote: Without your previous explanation, I still do not "get" Concept Annotation from the diagram. Maybe we just move on. The rest of the figure is good. Like how you redid Semantic Abstraction. Thank you for taking another look at it. I'm happy to keep thinking about ways to improve the Concept Annotation square. I do think your feedback this week has helped to improve it. I don't think this resolve your concerns, but I did slightly update that part in the version below. Will stop fiddling now see what Larry and Bill think as well. https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/8030363/115123640-3c83da80-9f7b-11eb-8e40-294467db4bb6.png — You are receiving this because you were mentioned. Reply to this email directly, view it on GitHub <#79 (comment)>, or unsubscribe https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AACWZKL673V4BPEJZTGE72TTJHJ2VANCNFSM4VKGQNUQ.
OK, thanks @LEHunter. I have updated the figure. I think this addresses your request, without requiring significance overall. Can we call this the one?
Works for me!
On Apr 20, 2021, at 9:21 AM, Tiffany J. Callahan @.***> wrote:
One last comment. I like the rearrangement, but wish there were a way to continue the arrows running left to right across the top. I didn’t even see the arrow pointing from KG construction to generated output at first. Maybe move the endpoints and benchmarks below generated output, and run one arrow down the right edge? … <x-msg://70/#> On Apr 17, 2021, at 8:49 AM, Tiffany J. Callahan @.***> wrote: Without your previous explanation, I still do not "get" Concept Annotation from the diagram. Maybe we just move on. The rest of the figure is good. Like how you redid Semantic Abstraction. Thank you for taking another look at it. I'm happy to keep thinking about ways to improve the Concept Annotation square. I do think your feedback this week has helped to improve it. I don't think this resolve your concerns, but I did slightly update that part in the version below. Will stop fiddling now see what Larry and Bill think as well. https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/8030363/115123640-3c83da80-9f7b-11eb-8e40-294467db4bb6.png https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/8030363/115123640-3c83da80-9f7b-11eb-8e40-294467db4bb6.png — You are receiving this because you were mentioned. Reply to this email directly, view it on GitHub <#79 (comment) https://github.com/callahantiff/PheKnowLator/issues/79#issuecomment-821869569>, or unsubscribe https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AACWZKL673V4BPEJZTGE72TTJHJ2VANCNFSM4VKGQNUQ https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AACWZKL673V4BPEJZTGE72TTJHJ2VANCNFSM4VKGQNUQ.
OK, thanks @LEHunter https://github.com/LEHunter. I have updated the figure. I think this addresses your request, without requiring significance overall. Can we call this the one?
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I also like this FINAL (!!) redesign. I also noticed the redesign of Concept Annotation. Let's go with this version.
I also like this FINAL (!!) redesign. I also noticed the redesign of Concept Annotation. Let's go with this version.
Sounds great. I'm officially closing this. Notice the super official checkmark emoji I added to the issue title to convey this 😄 .
Wait, wait, @LEHunter dare I say that this figure will satisfice?!
indeed. Need a new check box?
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Wait, wait, @LEHunter https://github.com/LEHunter dare I say that this figure will satisfice https://www.nobelprize.org/uploads/2018/06/simon-lecture.pdf?!
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indeed. Need a new check box? … On Apr 21, 2021, at 11:32 AM, Tiffany J. Callahan @.***> wrote: Wait, wait, @LEHunter https://github.com/LEHunter dare I say that this figure will satisfice https://www.nobelprize.org/uploads/2018/06/simon-lecture.pdf?! — You are receiving this because you were mentioned. Reply to this email directly, view it on GitHub <#79 (comment)>, or unsubscribe https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AACWZKI4FPZMZWHGZDIQOMTTJ476TANCNFSM4VKGQNUQ.
AWESOME. Better than a checkmark we need a Herbert Simon Emoji!
TASK
Need to create a figure that provides an overview of the
pkt
knowledge graph construction frameworkTODO