The wording in the Mandatory template for info.description is unclear.
Which specific authorization flows are to be used will be determined during onboarding process, happening between the API Client and the Telco Operator exposing the API, taking into account the declared purpose for accessing the API, while also being subject to the prevailing legal framework dictated by local legislation.
Expected behavior
At a minimum add a the before onboarding process or use the plural onboarding processes if that was the intent.
- during onboarding process
+ during the onboarding process
Alternative solution
Alternately, split this into two sentences.
"The specific authorization flows to be used will be determined during the onboarding process between the API client and the Telco operator exposing the API. This determination will consider the declared purpose for accessing the API and be subject to the prevailing legal framework dictated by local legislation."
Additional context
We've added this Mandatory text to QoD and it isn't clear.
Problem description
The wording in the Mandatory template for info.description is unclear.
Expected behavior At a minimum add a
the
before onboarding process or use the pluralonboarding processes
if that was the intent.Alternative solution
Alternately, split this into two sentences.
"The specific authorization flows to be used will be determined during the onboarding process between the API client and the Telco operator exposing the API. This determination will consider the declared purpose for accessing the API and be subject to the prevailing legal framework dictated by local legislation."
Additional context
We've added this Mandatory text to QoD and it isn't clear.
I'm happy to create a PR and discuss further.