-- Section 2.1 --
"At this time we consider only devices with web browsers" while the previous
text was about "devices without user interfaces". Finally, is this document for
devices with or without human interface ?
He suggests as a solution:
EV> I would suggest that at the first mention of " devices without user interfaces", the text mention "for future version" or something in the same line. The focus on user-interface devices is written a little too deep in the document, should come earlier in the text to avoid confusion.
I propose we do this. The first mention is in section one. We can say something along the lines of "A future document could provide a solution for devices without user interfaces. This document focuses on devices with user interfaces."
Eric points out in his review:
He suggests as a solution:
I propose we do this. The first mention is in section one. We can say something along the lines of "A future document could provide a solution for devices without user interfaces. This document focuses on devices with user interfaces."