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About page #40

Open notshi opened 6 years ago

notshi commented 6 years ago

Could we replace BCB is ... at the start of each paragraph with 'We / Our / etc' for a softer touch?

eg:

We provide the Community Radio station for Bradford and has successfully worked at the heart of communities for 25 years, supporting local people to be active in their community, the city, and to have a voice in the media.

We have over 200 active volunteers from Bradford’s diverse communities, mostly serving as volunteer broadcasters, or volunteer station managers supporting the work of others.

Our city centre premises provide a vibrant, inclusive, welcoming community hub where people from diverse cultures, neighbourhoods, ages and life experiences all come together on equal terms to take part in their Community Radio station.

notshi commented 6 years ago

Can we have a hard deadline to work towards? It will give me some time to get stuff in order to set aside some proper time away from work & other commitments to do this.

notshi commented 6 years ago

examples of about pages from successful grant receivers via grantnav

great examples (not from grantnav):

caprenter commented 6 years ago

I'll share the above with Mary. Ta.