Yesterday. I would accompany my friend Lily to a pet store on Nanshan Street. It was suddenly raining when we were walking in the street. Then we found a shop to sell umbrellas. So we joined the shop and wanted to buy umbrellas. When we arrived at the shop, a beautiful raincoat appealed to Lily. So she bought it without any hesitation. After the raining wares shopping, we were going on our way to a pet store.
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Yesterday, I was supposed to accompany my friend Lily to a pet store on the street in our town. At the start, it was sunny with some clouds floating in the sky. However, as we were walking down the street, it suddenly started raining. We then spotted a shop selling umbrellas and decided to take shelter there with the intention of buying some. Upon entering the shop, a beautiful raincoat in a model caught Lily's eye, and she bought it without any hesitation. While I just bought an umbrella in the model. After purchasing our rain gear, we continued on our way to the pet store.
A story: A shopping trip
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Yesterday. I would accompany my friend Lily to a pet store on Nanshan Street. It was suddenly raining when we were walking in the street. Then we found a shop to sell umbrellas. So we joined the shop and wanted to buy umbrellas. When we arrived at the shop, a beautiful raincoat appealed to Lily. So she bought it without any hesitation. After the raining wares shopping, we were going on our way to a pet store.
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Yesterday, I was supposed to accompany my friend Lily to a pet store on the street in our town. At the start, it was sunny with some clouds floating in the sky. However, as we were walking down the street, it suddenly started raining. We then spotted a shop selling umbrellas and decided to take shelter there with the intention of buying some. Upon entering the shop, a beautiful raincoat in a model caught Lily's eye, and she bought it without any hesitation. While I just bought an umbrella in the model. After purchasing our rain gear, we continued on our way to the pet store.