JOSS Paper text first notes

KonradHoeffner commented 1 year ago

Dear authors, here are some first quick notes while reading your JOSS paper submission for the review in https://github.com/openjournals/joss-reviews/issues/5117:

[x] missing spaces in front of the left parenthese of citations, for example "Forbes(Press, 2016)" (the whole citation seems broken, as "Forbes" is before the parenthese)
[x] What exactly is an "informatics offering"? Please use a term or phrase that is more clear.
[x] write out "ETL" on first use
[x] unclear term: "informatics programmer"
[x] please explain at the start what a property graph is
[x] bullet points either phrases starting lowercase and no full stop or sentences starting uppercase and full stop, not a mix of the them
[x] please capitalize abbreviations like CSV and API

hjwilli commented 1 year ago

These should be addressed with https://github.com/carnival-data/carnival/commit/d5d5a509d650ec09c0f4e63988e907c2c1abf373, closing.

KonradHoeffner commented 1 year ago

Most of the problems have indeed been addressed but the missing spaces have not been added yet. As I cannot reopen this issue, I will create a new issue for that.

carnival-data / carnival

JOSS Paper text first notes #112