cast-fuse / parkinsons-and-me

A service to match a person affected by Parkinson's with a relevant Parkinson's UK service
https://parkinsons-and-me.herokuapp.com
MIT License
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Closed ClairePUK closed 7 years ago

ClairePUK commented 7 years ago
ivan-unfolds commented 7 years ago

@ClairePUK

Could the top quote box be the same style and font as the previous pages - the "Parkinson's UK voice". (This says: Here's your personalised list of Parkinson's service) The other quote box style, colour, fonts are fine.

This bit of text is too long to fit in the tilted quote box. It will mean it would overspill on different devices. This is why we changed the text on the age page to 'Can we ask your age?' If you can think of a more succinct title then we can change it, otherwise I'd suggest leaving it as it is.

Could we close up the line space between 'Come back and visit your page any time:' and the URL?

We'll get onto this.

Can we make sure all the copy is the same as the Google doc?

As far as I can see the copy is fine. Is there anything specific that isn't right?

ClairePUK commented 7 years ago

Could we try: Here's your recommended Parkinson's services

ivan-unfolds commented 7 years ago

screen shot 2017-05-10 at 15 50 31

Still a bit long...

ivan-unfolds commented 7 years ago

screen shot 2017-05-10 at 15 52 18

ivan-unfolds commented 7 years ago

Can I suggest leaving the original quote box but changing the font to the 'Parkinson's voice' one.

ClairePUK commented 7 years ago

Can I try two more? Then I'll admit defeat:

  1. Here's your recommendations
  2. Your recommended Parkinson's services

Thank you

andrewMacmurray commented 7 years ago

This one fits screen shot 2017-05-11 at 14 33 33

ClairePUK commented 7 years ago

Yes, perfect - that'll do! (with a lower case 'r' 👍 )

andrewMacmurray commented 7 years ago

closed with pr #144