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Rewrote the cbsd_with_grafana article #4

Closed miker closed 6 years ago

miker commented 6 years ago

I rewrote the auto-translation for the cbsd_with_grafana.html article. I tried not to change content if at all possible. I included 3 TODOs. Line 125: is about resizing an image via HTML (bad idea) Line 421: is about 127.0.0.1:9090, and calling it the "prometheus admin interface" Line 474: I wasn't sure what the text actually means, so I couldn't rewite it.

Please let me know if I need to change/rewrite anything.

Thanks

olevole commented 6 years ago

Excellent! I looked at the changes. Of course, this is much better ;) The documentation of the project in English is in terrible condition, your fixes are a very good help to the project, thank you!

Line 125: is about resizing an image via HTML (bad idea)

Ok, agree with you!

Line 421: is about 127.0.0.1:9090, and calling it the "prometheus admin interface"

Yes, perhaps more correctly. I'm try to find official description for this port: https://github.com/prometheus/prometheus/wiki/Default-port-allocations it is called simply "Prometheus server"

Line 474: I wasn't sure what the text actually means, so I couldn't rewite it.

"we get the metric from FreeBSD RACCT and it is available for removal from each server along the path /rctl"

in other word, without google-translate ;-):

"In this articles we received metrics from FreeBSD RACCT framework and these data are available via /rctl path in the URL".

The following sentence explains that we are not limited to only RACCT metrics. And we can create additional metrics (for example traffic metrics, or billing data), and through separate paths (/traffic, billing) in URL we can also export additional data to grafana

olevole commented 6 years ago

Commited, Thanks!

miker commented 6 years ago

No problem, glad the changes worked. Thanks for the clarification. I should be able to work in a couple updates tonight.