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Repository for IETF draft-holmberg-mmusic-sdp-dtls
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Support for TLS added. Attribute name changed. #26

Closed cdh4u closed 7 years ago

bacampbe commented 7 years ago

Please avoid normative text like "MUST NOT make assumptions". It's better to talk about actions rather than thought crime :-). In this particular case, I think the actual normative bit is captured in the next sentence, so you could just drop the 2119 keywords from the sentence about assumptions.

You mean s/'MUST NOT'/'must not'?

bacampbe commented 7 years ago

s/eventhough/even though s/identiciate/indicate