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cehatch / Soil-Moisture-Paper

Soil moisture research from Foothills Preserve and Tidmarsh Nature Sanctuary, manuscripts
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2. One Sentence #4

Closed cehatch closed 6 years ago

cehatch commented 6 years ago

Writing Step 2: Articulate the story in one sentence. If you have co-authors, verify that everyone agrees with this sentence.

cehatch commented 6 years ago

2. Single Sentence: Variations in root-zone soil moisture has important implications for wetland restoration actions and the re-wilding of former cranberry bogs. (Cosh revision) Root-zone soil moisture is a critical component of the re-establishment of a natural ecosystem within a former cranberry bog.

ItoErika commented 6 years ago

@cehatch

Would "a functional wetland system" be possibly preferable to a "natural ecosystem"? Might "natural" be too vague / ambiguous a term?

cehatch commented 6 years ago

@ItoErika Yes, that's probably an improvement - thanks!

cehatch commented 6 years ago

Root-zone soil moisture is a critical component of the re-establishment of a functional wetland system within a former cranberry bog.