ceq5032 / ComicBookTWD

DIGIT 110 Project
https://ceq5032.github.io/ComicBookTWD/
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Digit Works Feedback #2

Open ceq5032 opened 11 months ago

ceq5032 commented 11 months ago

We value your feedback on our DIGIT Works presentation. Is there anything specific that you found commendable or particularly liked? Additionally, if there are areas where we can improve or if you have any critiques, we would greatly appreciate your input. Please take a moment to share your thoughts and comments below. Thank you!

lgmccurdy commented 11 months ago

Hi Walking Dead team! I absolutely love your website design, especially the set up for your "Chapter" page. A suggestion I have for completing your project would be to maybe add some type attributes to your balloons to further distinguish them in the output. I really liked listening to your presentation!

Remdog712 commented 11 months ago

Walking Dead Team, First off, really amazing design! The look immensely matches the comic book down to the almost grungy but comic book style. It looks and feels great to manuever. I'm really impressed with the Matrix styling on the code page and even styling for the ODD which shows some real attention to detail. Only thing I can reccomend would be possibly making the text color for your speech a little brighter to distinguish between speech and descriptions, but that's all up to the style you're going for! Great job!

rcc5418 commented 11 months ago

Hello, Walking Dead team, your work looks great. The presentation and content on your pages is very impressive, great job! There are just a few suggestions/critiques that I have for your project. Firstly, when I was exploring your 'Chapter' page, on a school computer during the DIGIT Work's presentation, the majority of your pages weren't adhering to the pattern of the first pages. The images were appearing below the text, instead of side-by-side, and similar issues. I think this is something you've fixed in your latest commit though, as I see there's been another one since your presentation, and when checking your site again everything looks fine. Secondly, on your 'Comic ODD' page, the images don't appear, just the alt text (I assume). I'd guess your links aren't hooked up properly or something. On the same page, it'd be nice if that sub-window would fit on the screen cleanly. In your 'Chapter' page again, you could make it clear what character is saying what line, like how a script is written, though that's a creative choice for y'all to make, and I don't think there's any way to see your XML code from the site so I don't know how easy it'd be.

gylertaydos commented 11 months ago

Hi, TWD team. Firstly, I absolutely loved the style of your website. The comic book font and the cook banner on the top look very professional. I also really loved the home page. The only issue I noticed is some of the images for the characters page as well as on the ODD page weren't loading, so you might need to go fix the file path in your code.

nhammer514 commented 11 months ago

Hello. I absolutely adore the visual style of the website. It is clean looking, easy to navigate, and fun to look through. I appreciate how, when you go into the Characters tab and select a page that a character is on, it will go to the exact page where they are mentioned. The website is very good, but there is still some bugs/issues. The Comic ODD page seems to be broken, as it is a bit messy looking. The table specifically is difficult is understand and read. Like the others mentioned, some character portraits do not load on the Characters page. Outside of the two errors I found, this is basically perfect. Good job fellas

cbl5678 commented 11 months ago

Hi Walking Dead team! I loved the website design! The font and little design elements brought your whole website together visually. The way you did the characters page was super clean and convenient. Only thing I would possibly look into changing is the chapters page. The content and visuals are great but there may be a better way to display the content itself so it is not a long webpage a reader is scrolling through. Like separate the chapters and for each chapter have a window where you can click to scroll to the next section of reading. Similar to how the Dennis team displayed the images for the comic here: https://remdog712.github.io/ComicBook_DIGIT110/