cfpb / design-manual

⚠️ THIS REPO IS DEPRECATED ⚠️ A set of design principles and standards for the Consumer Financial Protection Bureau.
https://cfpb.github.io/design-manual/
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Learn page template #426

Closed duelj closed 8 years ago

duelj commented 8 years ago

What is it?

V1 is looking to add its atomic element documentation to the DM for the use of other teams. Because the primary touchpoint with these elements is through the Wagtail CMS we have focused on the components that will be encountered there.

This page will live in the "global elements" section of the updated DM.

Learn page

nataliafitzgerald commented 8 years ago

@ajbush @duelj

Design edit:

Copy edits:

marteki commented 8 years ago

Reviewing this for UX in @schaferjh's stead. I'm focusing on usability, minor content tweaks, and ease of explanation.

Suggestions:

Learn page types provide focused, detailed information about a specific topic to users. These pages may contain lengthy text passages or interactive content that require more engagement from the user.

Generally, this should be the page template used for most new information and content; other higher-level page templates are mostly aimed at navigating users to the right Learn page.

  • Rephrase the long sentence containing "Generally, this should be the page template used for most new information and content". The language in this portion is very, very soft; it feels like "should" and "mostly" is used too often here. If it should be the default or first template considered for most new content, say so and make that clear.
  • I agree with @nataliafitzgerald that "learn page" should be lowercase in the intro paragraph.
  • Move list of page components to be included out of the skinny sidebar. It's harder to read than if it was in the main content flow under "When to use".
  • Move the second bullet point from the "Content guidelines" section out of the bullet point list, and lead with it in this section as a paragraph.

Repeating what I've already expressed elsewhere: kudos for the visualization of the major breakpoints, and listing the page components that could be included. 🎉

schaferjh commented 8 years ago

@ajbush Looks great, ready to publish!