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Write content for the provide filing details step #4

Closed natalia-fitzgerald closed 3 weeks ago

natalia-fitzgerald commented 1 month ago

Task

Write introduction text for the provide filing details step.

Context

In this step a filer is asked to provide information that is specific to the filing. This currently includes voluntary reporter status and filing point of contact information.

The information provided on this page meets the following criteria:

Parent story (for reference)

As a filer, I want a clear and concise introduction on the provide filing details page, so that I can understand what filing details includes, why I need to provide it, and ensure that I can enter the information correctly to avoid filing issues.

natalia-fitzgerald commented 1 month ago

@angelcardoz @dan-padgett The next step on this task is that we need to review and make any content adjustments to the intro content for the step. Once we finalize this content the full step will be ready for development (features on the page are already being built out --- phone extension and voluntary reporter status).

Here's my first pass:

Screenshot 2024-10-17 at 11 02 04 AM
dan-padgett commented 1 month ago

@natalia-fitzgerald Do you want to track the content adjustments in Figma only?

natalia-fitzgerald commented 4 weeks ago

@angelcardoz @dan-padgett We have one more piece of content work in order to complete this work. This will have to be updated to point to provide filing details.

Screenshot 2024-10-24 at 1 35 20 PM

Here's a first pass:

Screenshot 2024-10-24 at 5 17 21 PM
dan-padgett commented 3 weeks ago

@natalia-fitzgerald Is it better to say "your institution's voluntary reporter status" instead of just "your voluntary reporter status"? I also like keeping the clarification about who might contact the institution, as in the original. Putting that together, we could have: "Next, indicate your institution's voluntary reporter status and provide contact information for a person whom the CFPB or other regulators may contact about your filing."

We could simplify further: "Next, indicate your institution's voluntary reporter status and contact information for a person whom the CFPB or other regulators may contact about your filing." (Or replace "indicate" with "provide" if that reads better.)

natalia-fitzgerald commented 3 weeks ago

@dan-padgett Yep, I agree with that suggestion. I reworked this to accommodate that text and to keep it to 2 lines (to align with the other cards).

Here's where we've landed:

Screenshot 2024-10-25 at 11 46 37 AM
natalia-fitzgerald commented 3 weeks ago

This work is completed.