Editorial comments for section 3.1 (from Expert Review)

[yumi-sakemi]

Comments from Chloe (Expert Reviewer)

• sen 1 should end in a colon not a full stop
• in the list of hard problems, each one should be preceded by 'the'
• par 2: the grammar here is strange. You could write 'Although it would be sufficient to attack any of these problems to attack paiting-based crytography, the only known attacks thus far attack the discrete logarithm problem directly, so we focus on the discrete logarithm in this memo.'
• par 3: 'The well-known algorithms for solving the discrete logarithm problems include Pollard's rho algorithm [Pollard78], Index Calculus [HR83] and so on.' ->'The best known algorithms for solving the discrete logarithm problems are based on Pollard's rho algorithm [Pollard78] and Index Calculus [HR83].'

[Tsune3110]

OK!

This is a cross-check as a co-author.

[yumi-sakemi]

Thank you for your checking :-) I close this issue.