Editorial comments for section 4 (from Expert Review)

[yumi-sakemi]

Comments from Chloe (Expert Reviewer)

• 'we introduce secure pairing-friendly curves' -> 'we introduce some of the known secure pairing-friendly curves'
• 'widely use' -> 'in wide use' or 'widely used' (twice)
• 'peer-reviews paper' -> 'a peer-reviewed paper' or 'peer-reviewed papers'
• 'greatly depending' -> 'greatly dependant'
• 'so we consder that viewpoint...': grammar here is strange. Suggestion: 'so we choose to prioritize "security" and "widely used" over "efficiency" in consideration of future interconnections and interoperability over the internet.'

[yumi-sakemi]

fixed the following comments when we updated from version 03 to 04.

• 'widely use' -> 'in wide use' or 'widely used' (twice)
• 'peer-reviews paper' -> 'a peer-reviewed paper' or 'peer-reviewed papers'

[Tsune3110]

OK!

This is a cross-check as a co-author.

[yumi-sakemi]

Thank you for your checking :-) I close this issue.