Editorial comments for section 4.1 (from Expert Review)

[yumi-sakemi]

Comments from Chloe (Expert Reviewer)

• sen 1: 'selected by existed standards' -> 'that have been selected by existing standards'
• sen 3: 'described as' -> 'described in'
• sen 5: 'since 2016 in which exTNFS was proposed' -> 'since the 2016 exTNFS attacks'; 'curves that had security levels below 128 bits' -> 'curves that have had security levels below 128 bits'
• sen 6: 'Table1' -> 'Table 1'
• sen 7: ''security level' -> 'the security level'

[yumi-sakemi]

fixed the following comments when we updated from version 03 to 04.

• sen 6: 'Table1' -> 'Table 1'
• sen 7: ''security level' -> 'the security level'

[Tsune3110]

OK!

This is a cross-check as a co-author.

[yumi-sakemi]

Thank you for your checking :-) I close this issue.