Editorial comments for section 1.3 (from Expert Review)

cfrg / draft-irtf-cfrg-pairing-friendly-curves

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-cfrg-pairing-friendly-curves/

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Closed yumi-sakemi closed 4 years ago

yumi-sakemi commented 4 years ago

Comments form Chloe (Expert Reviewer)

sen 1: 'introduce' -> 'record' (they were introduced in the research papers that you cite); 'pairing-friendly curves' -> 'some pairing-friendly curves'.
sen 2: 'recent attack' ->'most recent attacks' (can 4 years ago still be considered recent?)

yumi-sakemi commented 4 years ago

We revised section 1.3 when we updated from version 03 to 04.

Tsune3110 commented 4 years ago

OK!

This is a cross-check as a co-author.

yumi-sakemi commented 4 years ago

Thank you for your checking :-) I close this issue.