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Discover: Thinglink - text and grammer #53

Closed chayaml closed 1 year ago

chayaml commented 1 year ago

Grammar and text edits:

Text that contains errors: In February 1896, Herzl published “The Jewish State,” calling upon Jews to obtain their own territory, to create institutions and forums to oversee Jewish immigration to and settlement in this territory**, and to ultimately create their own state. In addition to creating the World Zionist Organization, Herzl will help** found the Jewish Colonial Trust in 1899 and the Jewish National Fund in 1901.

Text edit: In February 1896, Herzl published "The Jewish State," calling upon Jews to obtain their own territory, establish institutions and forums to oversee Jewish immigration and settlement, and, ultimately, establish their own state. In addition to creating the World Zionist Organization, Herzl helped found the Jewish Colonial Trust in 1899 and the Jewish National Fund in 1901.

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To reproduce:

  1. Discover
  2. Thinglink - main menu
  3. Click on "visionaries of a nation"
  4. Click on Theodor Herzl
  5. Click on "key accomplishments"
yechielhoffman commented 1 year ago

Revised copy