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grammar / wording edits for "Block, element--magic" #2

Closed kroysemaj closed 9 years ago

kroysemaj commented 9 years ago

Most of my feedback is wording / grammar. I think the basic pitch is good.

Have you ever been faced with a code base that has been touched by a dozen or more developers all writing code, and as much as you want it to be able to flexible it just isn't?

This wording seems a little clunky to me. Here's my pass on this particular sentence.

Have you ever faced a code base worked on by a more than a dozen developers that is striving for flexibility but never quite gets there?

These can all be separate sentences.

B.E.M. is a CSS architecture. It's a methodology. It's a naming convention, and it is based off of Object Oriented CSS. OOCSS makes writing classes more flexible, and modular.

chrisdemars commented 9 years ago

I will work on these changes. Thanks!