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Prologue Outline #14

Closed nguyen34 closed 9 years ago

nguyen34 commented 9 years ago

Get basic idea for prologue with Fake MC and then get it approved. EZ

MagatsuCosmo commented 9 years ago

Read the outline.

I like option 2 tho ! and btw having all main characters as cameo is really cool! That's really interesting for a prologue I think.

nguyen34 commented 9 years ago

Read the outline.

Writing format is a bit crude and informal but overall plot is acceptable.

For future plot outlines, aim for a more 'objective' and 'clear' presentation with little-to-no-bias as a negative presentation can turn people away from even a potentially amazing story.

TwelveNights commented 9 years ago

Please pull and push to repository.

MagatsuCosmo commented 9 years ago

@nguyen34 Reformatting Required

nguyen34 commented 9 years ago

Prologue Outline story summary is accepted. However, document needs to be re-written so it could be used by artists to begin constructing the art

nguyen34 commented 9 years ago

Prologue Outline Verified. Format looks good. Overall, my only request is to have the cameos from the main characters be a bit more spaced out from each other, if possible.