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christofferholmstedt / dva501-master-thesis-report

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Improve the overal language in the report #35

Closed christofferholmstedt closed 10 years ago

christofferholmstedt commented 10 years ago

Some language issues (e.g. "As a part of SPA is the ...", the first sentence of the abstract which should be two sentences or rewritten, "appopiate" on page 23, "The livelock query make sure").

Also, the title seems a bit odd to me (why a comma after "model-checked" and "Space Plug-and-Play Architecturs Local Subnet Adaptation" sounds strange but that's maybe just because the domain is new to me).

christofferholmstedt commented 10 years ago

note: The first comment is actually in the introduction and not in the abstract.

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All parts have now been fixed.

Yes, the title is a bit weird but it's the best.