Project 1 Proposal - Peer Review

[trnhan194]

1. Clarity: The team does the job well in making the project's objectives crystal clear.
2. Feasibility: The plan looks feasible; however, the methodology could benefit from more detail. For example, specifying the statistical methods or analytical tools to be used could enhance clarity and feasibility. You may also think of potential challenges in data analysis and how they will be addressed.
3. Data source summary: The summary is thorough and detailed. For further development. to me, you might generate a brief discussion on the limitations of the dataset, such as missing data or potential biases.
4. Significance of the questions/insights: This team wants to address issues in the educational attainment of youngsters in English towns, focusing on socio-economic and geographic disparities. The project has the potential to uncover insightful trends and contribute to a deeper understanding of educational inequalities.
5. Practicality: This project is ambitious but achievable within the scope of a three-week long project. My recommendation would be to prioritise analyses that directly contribute to answering the research questions first if time is limited.

[tienvu95]

This comment is a little bit too general. You might want to be more specific in one of those points --> like the challenges that may face, or questioning their choices of variables.

[clarissdev]

Thank you very much for your comment. I also think that the limitation of the dataset could be examined in our project proposal, add we will add it soon. Thank you again!